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 |  Subject: Write On page 31  Thu Mar 04, 2010 2:23 pm | |
| Write five sentences about five different friends. Remember to use capital letters.| Name | 1st writing | 2nd writing | Grade | | Kelly | do again | X | X | | Lisa | X | X | XXX | | Name | XXX | XXX | XXX | | Name | XXX | XXX | XXX | | Name | XXX | XXX | XXX | | Name | | | | | Name | | | | | Name | | | | | Name | | | | | Name | | | | | Name | | | |
FBC = feedback coming
TBG = to be graded
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Kelly Kim
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Join date : 2009-09-29
| | Subject: diffierent friends Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:02 pm | |
| My best friend is Mun su bin. My friend's name is park ji hae. My friend's name is bryan. My friend's name is Lee gi hu. My friend's name is Sin ji yeon | |
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| | Subject: First Feedback for Kelly Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:20 pm | |
| - Kelly Kim wrote:
- My best friend is Mun su bin. My friend's name is park ji hae. My friend's name is bryan. My friend's name is Lee gi hu. My friend's name is Sin ji yeon[_]
This is a good first effort Kelly. Please tell me something about your friends. For example, My friend Andy likes to play soccer. Remember to use capital letters.
Change the word = I saw three hours of cartoons on TV.
Fix the mistake = I last the ball. // I am do my homework. // i forgot my book.
Erase a word = I lost the the ball.
Add a word = [___] | |
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Kelly Kim
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Join date : 2009-09-29
| | Subject: diffierent friends Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:42 pm | |
| My best friend is Mun soo bin. My friend's name is Park je hae. My friend's name is Sin je eun My friend's name is Lee gi hu. My friend's name is Lsa | |
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